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Da du deutsch sprichst, dachte ich mir, ich könnte die Kritik gleich in dieser Sprache verfassen. Mir fällt dies zumindest viel leichter, sollte es unerwünscht sein, versuche ich es aber natürlich gern auf Englisch.
Zunächst einmal - Wirklich schönes Foto! Ich liebe Taschenuhren. Sowohl als Motiv, als auch als Accesoire und hatte schon länger vor mich selbst an derartigem zu versuchen. Die Uhr selbst ist wirklich schön, insbesondere die Ziffern wirken einzigartig und besonders. Farblich geht es hier ja eher in den kühleren Bereich, während ich meist eher goldene Varianten sehe. Trotzdem ist das Bild in sich harmonisch und abgestimmt, die Farben sind angenehm und die dunklen Blautöne stehen in einem leichten Kontrast zu den helleren Blüten ohne vom Motiv abzulenken. Bei den vorderen, leicht unscharfen Blüten hätte ich mir vielleicht doch ein wenig mehr Form (Also Schärfe) gewünscht, allgemein ist es aber nett platziert, auch der Bildausschnitt und der Abstand zum Motiv gefallen mir gut. Das Bokeh ist wunderbar gelungen, insbesondere die leichten Lightdots sind noch einmal ein kleiner Eyecatcher des Hintergrunds. Ich meine ein ganz leichtes Bildrauschen wahrzunehmen, was aber nicht stört. Die Spiegelung auf der Oberseite der Uhr ist beinahe zu intensiv um die Dunkelheit vorzutäuschen, da hier ein großer Kontrast von dunklen Bäumen zu hellem Himmel auszumachen ist, während das Foto allgemein eher nach Dunkelheit (/Nacht) aussieht. Alles in allem aber eine wirklich schöne Aufnahme, sodass es lediglich bei der Originalität kleinen Abzug gibt, da ich gerade in letzter Zeit viele der Taschenuhren sehe, wenn auch meist eher in wärmeren Tönen oder einem anderen Konzept, was dies wieder ausgleicht.
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TheDemonStorm Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I adore this. <3
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:iconlasupermeow:
laSuperMeow Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Photographer
diese Farben *__*
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke :)
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xXxHeatherAnnxXx Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland :) You are an amazing photographer! I can't help but comment on some of these :3
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :)
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:iconselunia:
Selunia Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Amazing shot! Very good idea!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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:iconblumilein:
blumilein Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012   Photographer
Oh this is very very beautiful! I love the colors and of course the motive ;) :love:
Great! :heart:
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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:iconsusanneblass:
SusanneBlass Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice <3
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot! :)
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:iconsusanneblass:
SusanneBlass Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bitteschön
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:iconstrictlyphysical:
StrictlyPhysical Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great <3
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :)
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:iconregineanastacio:
regineanastacio Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi, awesome photo! Your work has been featured in my journal entry [link] :hug:
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:iconrukiagrimmjow:
RukiaGrimmjow Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful !!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:iconashleyphotographics:
AshleyPhotographics Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lovely! :)
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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:iconashleyphotographics:
AshleyPhotographics Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yourwelcome! :)
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Cupcake150484 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Adorable!!!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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cyanidebrighteyes Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
love how the title works with this magnificent piece of art.
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconcalimer00:
calimer00 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Sehr schön!!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke! :)
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:iconlowicek:
Lowicek Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
wow perfect ! I love this photo :-)
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! :)
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TheFatbuda Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You have been featured here: [link] :wave:
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:iconshadowinlight:
ShadowinLight Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Photographer
Hi, you've been featured here [link] :heart:
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:iconmoony1357:
moony1357 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love your themes and of course, your photography...
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :)
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:iconrareflower3377:
rareflower3377 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Great work as always. :)
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :D
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rareflower3377 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Of course. :)
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:iconspeck2:
Speck2 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It reminds me of days gone by............
Cindy
:heart:
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
;)
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart:
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:iconhappyberry331:
happyberry331 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
i love this!!!!!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! :)
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happyberry331 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
your welcome!!!!!
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:iconbrokenglassphotos:
brokenglassphotos Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional Photographer
Excellent DOF! Love the composition as well.
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! :)
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CrazyBaka Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
This is Awesome!!! The lighting gives it a dreamy sort of look :love:
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much! :)
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ZokiArt555 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
:clap::)
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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