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Critique by ~Jax106931 Mar 31, 2013, 9:42:18 AM
Oh, I already posted my opinion, so look at that, but I'll add. You have great vision with your art, but I'm not sure where you were going with this one really, as you can tell by the impact rate. Your technique is always amazing. The originality quite follows many common photography micro styles, an up close picture of something, and a common object such as fruit. I like the idea that it was frozen but by the picture, it is hard to tell that it is. The picture doesn't tell a story, or anything. Its like, "Oh hey, an orange. Great. Next picture." I must say the vision of a frozen orange is much more interesting but I'm not able to see it in the picture. I think the direct straight angle is a bit minimizing of the orange. Maybe thats why. It takes away the depth of the picture since the orange is flat. The main color in the picture is orange, which is fine, but as i said, it blends, and when I look at the redish orange outer peel, my eye is attracted to that more than anything however there isn't enough. I wish I could see more of it. This is for constructive criticism, but keep up with the good work. I hope this helped ^.^
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Mood: Love ~x-orange-marmalade-x Apr 10, 2013  Student General Artist
this looks awesome! ^_^
nice work, it's simple yet quite interesting at the same time, plus it looks very refreshing. :orange:
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*AljoschaThielen Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :)
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~CherryClown21 Apr 1, 2013
Interesting photo. Great picture!
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*AljoschaThielen Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks.
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~CherryClown21 Apr 2, 2013
Yep :)
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Mood: Sadness ~Jax106931 Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I must say I was kindof disapointed in this, all your other works are amazing! But this looks like its in too dull a light, all the colors blend together and its hard to make out any details of the image :/ its not bad, just hardly comparable to your other amazing works.
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*AljoschaThielen Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the critique, but I must apologize, because I submitted this picture one year ago. Take a look at the details, so you know now I have a lot more experiences. :)
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Mood: Compassion ~Jax106931 Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes youve came a far way ^.^ I love your work :)
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*AljoschaThielen Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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~Kheelaia Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing
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