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Golden Sword by AljoschaThielen Golden Sword by AljoschaThielen
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The artist is surely a talented light-player.
The beauty of the light is delicate but strong, just as the name of the photo suggests. The lens flare at the corner is brilliant; it effectively helps maintaining the balance of the image.
If only there were a little more shade at the lower right corner and the right half of the bottom edge.
The best feature that makes this photo stands out is not the sunlight, but the little twig reaching out at the center. It pierces into the stream of light, as strongly as 'another' sword, and creates a very beautiful contrast.
The tangle of thin vines is an interesting and elegant bonus, softening the whole photo of mainly 'straight' and 'pointy' strokes.

A real pleasure for the eyes...
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ihamo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
This is looking pretty nice!
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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Scarlet-Lark Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how the branch interrupts the light in this piece-there is something that draws my gaze instinctively to it. Very nice photograph, and great job capturing this moment!
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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AraujaPhoto Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So beautiful ^^ *
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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c4-r Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely shot.
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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SimplyKristina Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Beautiful caught my eye will be favoriting
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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SimplyKristina Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Your welcome <3
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LogoSpot Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
This amazing!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :)
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LogoSpot Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
You're welcome! :)
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MCplayer94 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wow! amazing
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
Thank you.
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Saru-Cosplay Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Beautiful light!!!
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:iconaljoschathielen:
AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! :)
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Vermicule Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing!
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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moderleib Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
ich hab so das gefühl, dass das bild in s/w auch gut funktionieren würde, wegen dem leichten rauschen v.a.
so in farbe finde ich es in den mitten/tiefen ein wenig unschön, und täusche ich mich damit, dass da ein wenig grobe farbabstufungen zu erkennen sind, die übergänge kommen mir stellenweise so vor.
ansonsten aber vom aufbau und dem licht her wirklich gut gemacht; dafür, dass es eine gegenlichtaufnahme ist, sind die kontraste wirklich super :)
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ja, das Bild ist leider etwas verrauscht, was irgendwie aber auch gut in die Gesamtstimmung des Bildes passt, finde ich.
Danke!
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moderleib Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
alles in allem finde ich auch, dass das rauschen der stimmung vom bild sehr zuträglich ist.
Mir ist nur kürzlich selbst beim bearbeiten öfter aufgefallen, dass leicht verrauschte bilder bei der tonwertkorrektur bzw. wenn man mit gradationkurven rumspielt, dazu neigen, bei den farbverläufen seltsame abstufungen zu entwickeln und jetzt fange ich an, das überall zu sehen haha (oder es mir einzubilden)
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AljoschaThielen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ist mir aber auch schon aufgefallen, finde ich auch echt unschön. :/ Bei diesem hier ist es mir nicht so sehr aufgefallen, liegt vielleicht daran, dass beim bearbeiten die Sonne auf meinen Bildschirm geschienen hat, wodurch es meine ursprüngliche Vorstellung etwas verfälscht hat. :D
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